The only version ive heard of this song is by tune up! and so i only knew the chorusy lyrics, but i enjoyed this version too although sometimes it seems theres a bit too much going on to be able to heard every single thing.
even though there's no vocals i thing youve worked the sounds well enough that it doesnt feel empty, nice mix!
happyhappyhappy! thats what this mix makes me think, it seems to work well without the vocals because you haev added lots of extra in - it might be my speakers, or what you intended but some parts sound a little distorted... I also like the extra break you put in - shows youve got your own imagination and can develop the song XD nice change from people almost exactly copying the original!
as u see it was a long time since i was on NG and i worked with much music.. example.. like this =)
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